October 20, 2008

my sweet subconscious

this and then
black patent promises
sweetly made by my subconscious
quietly humming
that it’s just a careful study in patience
a shyly made line drawing
of which flooring material
I would choose, so carefully,
should you opt to floor me
this day or then
as I step carefully
in black patent promises
my subconscious assures me
are all the rage

3 comments:

murat11 said...

I like: should you opt to floor me. Very cool shoes.

jsd said...

fantastically subliminal

Anne said...

Thanks much!